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As I walked home yesterday,
feeling somewhat down
as per usual,
I spied
you.

Well, technically,
I didn't so much spy
as step
in you
and get my socks wet.

I was just about to be angry,
when I noticed
what you were looking at.

It was the sky.

And in that moment
I couldn't feel angry,
for you are just a puddle
who wishes
to be a cloud
or a tree.
But instead you are a puddle.
And people
will
simply
insist
upon
stepping
on
you.
:iconscaramouche16:

Author's Comments

This is an ode to a puddle.

No, I don't get it either.

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:icontongue-tie:
i love puddles <3
and splashing in them, when i'm wearing my rainboots:D

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my heart's on fire let me reach out to you today
:iconchristianonfire7:
Wow, interesting written, never read a poem about a puddle before. Poor sad sounding puddle.

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Be strong and courageous, and do the work. Do not be afraid or discouraged, for the Lord God, my God, is with you. He will not fail you or forsake you.
| 1 Chronicles 28: 20 |

:iconvibrant-impulse:
This is amazing.
So trueee! :)

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I'll be your ambulance,
If you'll be my accident.
:iconart-e86:
A puddle who aspires to be the sky - luscious - lovely & great.

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:headbang:

I don't believe in God because when I asked him he said he didn't believe in me.
:iconpandacat-productions:
:clap:

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I know the truth about penguins........:tux: :noes: :faint:

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Damn you sir! Damn your eyes! And your little dog too! :evillaugh:

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